all credit for back track here -> http://www.newgrounds.com /audio/listen/136910
solo is mine
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I like the feel of the music. the beat and melody are nice.
- BUT i feel your lead tense, with strain, you're not bending in tune and not leading in time. Don't use as much tension, and don't compose for what you can play, compose 1st, then try and play, so you're not restrained of what your fingers can do.
cheers mate
awesome
im 11 an i like mastodon
pretty sweet
you should check out meh solo "The lost and the forgotten" :D
great work on this!
5/5
10/10
not bad
keep it up man i like this
it sounds like me when i play my stuff with my band
yeah hopefully someday ill be able to post me band on newgrounds that would be beast in fact my band is halfway through finishing our first album
Thx man.. and im looking forward to see some songs from your group..
if it sounds something like this
btw i have started a band too... but they are all newbies.
but its gonna be fun any way ^^
if things go smoothly ,i post up some of our songs here too ^^
Kinda Lacking...
It seemed a little choked, try not muting after every lick. Also, I don't know if I'm right or not, but you sounded a little out of tune? Anyway, try to add some more rhythmic variation into it, branch out your style, add new licks, and try not to revert to using "comfort licks" (ones you naturally go to when you play), because it gets a little same-e. In all though, a good attempt!
i tuned the guitar perfect before playing, but it was somehow out of tune in the begnning. it was a bad guitar.. (im not just saying that , its an.. 100$ guitar)
and its not for making solos .. the width on the neck are Enormous.
gonna buy a new one later on..
but at least you did enjoy it... . i think
new variation will come with the new guitar =D
thx man
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.
Olzone 
