I like this just fine, but it was too simple.
(and in there i heard more potential)
To me, I believe you could have made 1 amazing break-beat* of this song if you had changed the beat at :28 by speeding up a little more sooner and then dropping that beat to start a new one. Not to mention around the 4th vocal repeat you could have started to alter the voice to sound like a deaf moan as you stretch it out with some breaks or do with it something else amazing.
break-beat* = genre
In my opinion this has more potential in a different genre.
No offense meant to Dance but not much beats a good break-beat.
Im gonna take this to heart get the original remix i made and try make either a break beat of dub step track out of it.
It's a great song, but I absolutely LOVE 0:56 onwards. That rhythm from 0:56 onwards makes the song IMO. Great lead up as well.
Well done, fantastic song altogether. The beat, the ambience, the vocals.
You did a great job, love it.
It's okay, i guess
It has just an okay beat, and definitely lose the vocals
The synth makes it sound like Ayla :P
Nice track lol
Check out my dnb track "Free World" if you have the time.
yea i need some feedback/attention on it, lol
This is Great
I listen to alot of dance music and this is just great.
Make more like this but different.
Awesom vocal !!
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.