Okay...
You are starting to get a bit repetitive now. However, this one is a little better. The sound feels a bit smoother than the other two.
Author Comments
This is the third time to remake this song, It is definitely getting much better.
I have continuously been taking reviews, this website is helping me a lot to become a better artist.
PLEASE write a review. That's how I get better.
PLEASE Ignore the silence at the end, I don't know why it did that.
bass
bass need to be louder
Parkerman1700 responds:
I may have just made a breakthrough in a realization of the importance of suspense!!!!!!!!!!!
I agree as well lol
yeah the bass needs to be louder as well >.< but its Still good! keep it up man =D
I agree
some vengeance samples would make it better, also the bass needs to be louser!
good synths and mix of envolopes, yup very nice
Keep the good ear food up! Yum :D
percussion
your synths and progressions are sick but your percusion is soooo weak. Try putting the kick through the "Compresor" ser to Drums.(assuming this is FL)
I tell people all the time GET VENGEANCE SAMPLES. it will take your sound to the next level.
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