Hey dude. Don't listen to him. It's a very good. I am a musician and altho music is an art, it's also used to express yourself. It doesn't have to be good. Most of the popular bands we have today didn't start out as amazing as they are now. Keep up the good work, kid. ^_^
It's okay, don't slop it together next time. Music is an art and it takes lots of time and dedication. Please make something amazing next time.