Needs a lot of work
It is under a minute long and does not seem to have much of a rhythm to it sadly. It sounds like you have one instrument going for the most part and then you just slapped in sounds as you went along without trying to make it fit along as a beat. It kind of sounds funky though.
If you were to resubmit this I would advise you to make it longer and work on the rhythm a bit more so it flows more smoothly. It is not a bad attempt though at trying to make a beat though. good job on at least putting a bit of effort into it.
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