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Needs a lot of work

It is under a minute long and does not seem to have much of a rhythm to it sadly. It sounds like you have one instrument going for the most part and then you just slapped in sounds as you went along without trying to make it fit along as a beat. It kind of sounds funky though.

If you were to resubmit this I would advise you to make it longer and work on the rhythm a bit more so it flows more smoothly. It is not a bad attempt though at trying to make a beat though. good job on at least putting a bit of effort into it.

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DXsamurai responds:

thanks for the review, iwll try with the rhythm

Decent

It's a good start, but really the clip is just under a minute long and doesn't really go through many changes in melody. It's just the same rhythm over and over so it gets stale really fast.

It has a funky sound to it, which is good, but it sounded a bit choppy too. I think you could certainly work on making it flow a bit better instead of sounding so....chopped...and not chopped in a good way, like chopped in a low quality way.

Like I said though it's a great start. The percussion is cool, I just think you should extend it and switch it up a bit.

Keep at it.

-RRC-

DXsamurai responds:

thanks for the review, i wiil try to switch it up.

Funky, clanky, but just a little off.

I liked the kind of gritty feel of the song. It sounded like someone was pounding away in an instrument factory. That said, the sound wasn't incredibly appealing to me, and I think the melody left a lot to be desired.

I realize this might be an experimental piece, but I would have enjoyed a little bit more of a coherent melody. There are the few bars that are repeated over and over, but they just were not enough to satisfy me. The percussion, however, was steady and very pleasant.

If you could extend this mix, I think it'd be great. Leave the melody alone, don't mess with its length or tone, and it will sound a lot better. Add a couple more sounds or instruments, to make it sound less like an experiment. Other than that, it's pretty enjoyable.

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DXsamurai responds:

thanks for the review, i will see what i can do.

nice

bro i can picture this in an samurai anime!!!
nice

... that's all you can say!?

This is an amazing piece, it almost reminds me of an intro to a movie. In fact if it's alright with you I might use this in a video of mine.

DXsamurai responds:

cool with me go a head

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Listens
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Faves:
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Downloads
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Votes
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Score
4.00 / 5.00

Uploaded
Jul 28, 2008
5:36 AM EDT
File Info
Song
1.8 MB
48 sec

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