Sounds cheesy ^^
Intro is oke, overdone but alright.
I really dislike the weak synth. In the intro and those chords doesnt help much either. But after a while it gets better. ALOT BETTER. But after such a massive breakdown the chorus is such a let down!! Try to imrpove the chorus ALOT more. Like adding hihats ealier and more fxes. More background synths to keep it alive. It needs to make people either dance or wave there arms in the air. If you would make the chorus better you got yourself a great track. The varation is great. Breakdown is awesome. You've got some good ideas but i think that it's isn't aswell executed as you wanted it to be. Just a hunch.
But oh god, i want to remix this. With what program did you make this? I presume FL. Not sure about that tough.
Please come in contact with me :).
Please check out my new song too!