This is definitely an amateurish ambient song - the plink synth is far too sharp and loud as compared to the rest of the track. The kick seemed unnecessary, as all that it does is jump around with no extra backbeats to help balance it out. I really like the ambient part, though. I don't know if you used any preset synths for the ambient sounds, but I really liked what you did with them. That, I think, is what you are best at - ambient composition. There ain't nothing wrong with soft music, but it definitely takes a lot of work trying to make some. To this day, I still have a bit of trouble with making ambient tracks. There are a few parts where you used the wrong notes, but I think that you have a fair amount of potential - I can already hear your own style in this track. My biggest piece of advice is to PRACTICE - Don't give up. Push buttons, play with sounds, listen to what notes sound good and what ones don't mix at all, practice blending those synths!
Too many off tune notes.
Also try to find more instruments,
or better makes some.
Fl studio come with a crapload of effects.
Changed them up a bit because the moment the song started
playing.. instantly you know its an FL Studio Attempt.
well thanks for telling me ^^;
i'll just try harder till it works out... :D