can I say...
that you surprise me all over again?
it's....just one word: beautiful!
10/10 (what a wonder....like EVERYTHING you do...)
What an amazing song. I can certainly tell you put your soul into it.
An image definately popped into my head with this one. A man, walking alone on a path. The forest he walks through is not that of trees, but of buildings. He is looking at the world around him as he walks, a solemn xpression on his face. He sees children playing, couples holding hands, a women feeding the birds. Such happiness has left him. He walks on. The sun starts to set. The sorrow that grips him is not a simple sadness, that fades with a smile. Rather, an intricate web of emotion, that has left him where he is today. As he watches the sunset, the scene fades.
Inspiration often strikes unexpectedly, I know it has for me, I wish it would grace me with a song like this. This is a truly amazing piece of work that encompasses sorrow in a way I don't think I've heard before. Your pieces are some of my favorite, and this one didn't dissapoint. Keep up the good work.
I love the imagery you've set up. It is very poetic. Your short story here has inspired me, and for that I thank you.
I've found that if you always wait for inspiration to come, you'll end up with very little musical output. Sometimes, you've just got to say, "I don't care how I feel, I'm going to compose!" The song may end up sounded terrible, but you'll at least gain a bit more experience. If you force yourself to get started, inspiration will often present itself oddly enough. You've just got to stick with it and keep the music coming!
Thank you for the review sir. :)
Trevor, I found this completely by chance and I am so happy that I did. It touches the heart in ways that only music can do. Very well done! Your music helps me to express feelings that can't be spoken in words. Thank you.
You are very welcome. Thank you for your review haffams!
a story... of two...
This song gets to me... I feel the emotion, which is in every bit sorrowful...
heres what i think of when i listen to it
a bond between two... separated, by unforeseen fates... one day, they finally see each other again, but this is the last time they will see each other... as on this day, one is destined to die, both cannot exist together... only one can truly be... The girl lives... but the one she's loved for such a long time dies...... in the time they had together, these two cherished every moment of their time, nobody could love as these two could... their love was virtually unbreakable... but time is cruel... to be loved with such a passion, but to be broken apart so easily... in memory, their love lives on...
any two who feel this love have a strong bond... this bond, they must never let go of...
this song is beautiful in the same way its sorrowful... this is perfection of an emotion to say the least... :)
Your description sounds like a movie trailer! It gave me chills. :p Thanks for reviewing!
It's just simply beautiful words can't just describe how it makes me feel listening to this piece, it does bring back all the painful memories of the time I hurt the one I most cared about and breaks my heart
It's painful realizing that you hurt someone you care about. I definitely can relate to that. :(
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.