try using a Mario song next time.
its a somewhat respectable tune but the reason people are rating it low is......
1. its not a mario song, kinda ripping off half the people who listen
2. some parts are just messy and muddy
3. all the instraments sound the same
work on these and you should be fine
I should have just named it Action at a Funeral like I did for my EP. well thanks anywayz