I really like the entire sound and feeling of the piece when it gets around 2:00. Durn is right about the filter on the other parts getting in the way of the baseline. Despite that, I still really enjoyed what I was hearing.
Good stuff. Can tell you put some thought into it. 4/5. =3
the bassline seems a little over-filtered. it sounds cool when it's by itself but gets kind of muddy when mixed with the other elements. maybe start bringing the filter cutoff/res down a bit when the strings come back in?
rhythm section needs some work as it's very repetitive (however, I do like the samples used). play around with adding some cymbal action.
great effort, dude. :)
Thanks alot i'll remember your advice ... again :P