started so cool.. :[
Until about 0:32 I loved it, it had some heavy drive, a little spark of Prodigylike heavytechno there, stil maintaining the new wave feel, than that distorted electro-guitar sounding instrument at the background did fit it very well.
I think you shouldn't have used that drum which comes after and is present throughout the song, kinda makes it lighter, when it should me heavy.
Thats my opinion , anyhow, great idea for the song, if you'd remake it, sounding heavier, I'd give 10, cuz its really cool.
New wave is a awesome style to chill down and your music fits in but your chorus for so the speak makes the music in the "background" I don't know if that was your intention, still a wicked sound
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