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Jul 25, 2008 | 10:26 AM EDT
File Info
7.5 MB
9 min 24 sec
4.36 / 5.00

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Rated 4.36 / 5 stars
Plays & Downloads:
632 Plays | 66 Downloads
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Electronic - Dance

Author Comments

Hey. Can't decide if this song is dance or trance. Its a working progress and the finished version won't be this long. (Had to export at 112kb/s, so sorry for bad quality) This is the 1st song i've made with buildups in, so i'm proud of that!
11 patterns
9 instruments
~ 8 hours work
Yeh, and its very repetitive. Ideas for improvement would be greatly appreciated.





Rated 3.5 / 5 stars


I understand what it is you are trying to pull off here, and let me tell you now that you are using the right sounds and lead instruments, but i'm not to sure i you are using the correct key signature. I believe it is when using the key signature that you have messed up. Its all about the series of notes you are using and i'm not to sure if you know the set of notes which correspond best to your song and what you have made so far. If anything, this song could have been great but you gotta get your notes right, plus it sounds way to retro. May i suggest throwing in some different variaties of melodies?

Really, all you have to do is to take your time. You are rushing this way to much and you just gotta take it slow. try it out next time and you'll see the difference.

cullum14 responds:

cheers for advice, but i still dont understand the key signature thing


Rated 4 / 5 stars

v. good 8/10

hmm....v good.
could do wth more bass.....ppl like bass

and i couldnt feel it through my only an 8/10

keep up the good work though

cullum14 responds:

yeh i'm no good a bass. Perhaps you could pm with some tips on how to make a good bassline