I don't know what it was about this one, I don't like it so much.
First of all, your melody is... unique, but at the same time very annoying, in my opinion anyway.
It might be my hangover, or the melody gives me a headache.
I don't see much of a scale that this is based on, almost seems random.
The drums are okay, but kindof unoriginal, I've heard these drums so many times, did you use a loop for them? It sounds like it.
The song is not bad, but it's definately not good.
Practice with sequencing and scales, (and mastering) and you will be on a good path.
I agree... sorta
This really was my first try so don't expect it to be my best
I got the hang of the basics and made this song, now i need to build on that, make things less repetitive and add more quality into what turns out to be my next song
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.