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Slowly, she mouthed the words 'collapse'.
From day one to day seven hundred and fifty six;
A puckered look like when we'd kiss.
Behind such lips had plans she devised.
We were like the terminally ill..
Like people in a falling airplane..
What was the point of ever holding on..
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Coolio
Got somewhat boring. Actually a little cooler than your other "epic" song. It got boring up until 4:00, where it got cool. Some parts would clash at sound a little too dissonant for my liking, but whatever. It's still cool. That's it I guess rofl.
niice
Sorry about the bigot who zero voted you. The mastering in this one is phenomenal. The drums are glitchy, but only just enough to still consider them laid back. The ambiance with the pads is awesome, and the guitar is awesome. Even though it's so long, the quality of the song does not diminish one bit, both quality wise, and production wise. Kind of reminds me of KingBastard when he was submitting Glitch stuff. Only thing that bugs me is the acidy synth thats just being thrown all over the background from 2:26 to whenever.
Lapse responds:
Yeah, its alright. No big deal. I make better music then them. : D
Yeah, i thought it'd be interesting to see how my prog rock influence would go with my idm and glitch background. I think it makes a good mash up. As far as that ambient pad goes, those are actually keys, some random set of keys i had made a long time ago that i found and really liked. So it all sort of started with that actually. So i just messed with them until they had a light airy ambient sound to them. Which i've been doing lately with my piano stuff. I'm glad you like the guitar. I've only picked it up about 4 months ago! I'm glad you dont think the quality and or production didn't fall. Thats what i was going for. Making a long piece that would keep interesting the entire time. I worked in this in 3 different sections, which im sure you can pick them out. Then i strung them together. Now that you mention that 'acidy synth'. Which is actually a guitar : D
I didnt mean for it to pan around like that, i wanted it to pan right then left XD. I'll have to change that, i didnt notice it till right now. I need to get new headphones so i can hear things like that. x_x
I'm still making changes to this, i just thought i'd post up what it is now. Get some feedback on whats going good and bad and such : D
I really appreciate your review. Thank you again.
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