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For the Mac8-July.


Not bad

I think that you're still fading out too early, so you could shave a second off the track and no-one would notice.

The tune itself is exactly what it says on the tin - sad. I'd consider increasing the length and making the piano more uniform to deal with the expression of the sadness, as it's too complicated with the beat and abstract nature of the way you've played it at present.

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loogiesquared responds:

Thanks, stop reviewing old music, i'm accually sick of this song.


The melody of the piano could be quite nice, if only it wouldn't sound so shrill. It's almost a bit overamplified.

Also, the drum beat and the melody don't seem to play the same timing or tempo, which sounds a bit odd in the beginning. But towards the end it does sound all right.

You should try and take away some effects from the piano to give it a better sound.

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loogiesquared responds:

lol, i responded.

Nice but lacking

For the time is a good selection of music you got here.

The piano is a good sound mixed with Hip Hop ,the result is a interesting sound of more upbeats sound. The tune is not bad the piano plays wel,l and the tune is pretty good as short but brief song.

The major problem is the actual piano itself it repeats itself ,there is not much variety in this track. its a loop which is fine. The trouble is the Hip hop sounds, a bit muffled in there with the piano. It sounds blurry and not very clear. The track left me feeling cold ,it did not strick me as a emotional track. it did not grab me at all. So the result is a shame really.

Overeal maybe make more of the piano and make stronger, sounds to improve the tune.

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loogiesquared responds:

Yeah, i tried changing the Key to Bb and the Cb, but then i screwed it up and had to start all over.

Memorable but aggravating mismatched beats.

For the first listen, I really felt like the beats and slow melody didn't match up at all in tempo. Though I don't find it quite as aggravating anymore, it definitely still sounds odd.

Not much of a song - it just sorta starts, adds the beats, then keeps going with no movement. I mean, the melody doesn't go anywhere - just looping over and over. At the end, I just feel unsatisfied.

The thing isn't particularly emotional either, despite its name. Though in a minor chord, you've got to perhaps make the beats a simpler match, get some varied melodies on the go, then maybe give some emotive melodies the space to breathe.

Keep at it.

In the end, the mismatched beats became memorable, although I'm not sure I ever enjoyed it.

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loogiesquared responds:

i'm not sure i ever enjoyed YOUR comment, mr.!

Not too fond.

Sounds very abstract, but then, music is the most abstract art there is because it lacks any words or direct references to things happening in nature. It was a little odd that everything was panned to the right, and kinda threw me off balance. Overall, a decent job, although I'm not personally terribly fond of it. Best of luck.

loogiesquared responds:

best of luck for what?

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Credits & Info

3.23 / 5.00

Jul 24, 2008
2:26 PM EDT
Hip Hop - Modern
File Info
896.3 KB
58 sec

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