this is so creepy soudning...i agreen with deathkavaderva about the poetic stuff in the song
your music would be good for something like advert for movies and things, because they're short
9/10 a bit short
sounds pretty haunting, especially while reading your poetic authour comment
so this is what i propose as an idea
you record your voice saying that and put it over the song with some gentle reverbs or something would add to the emotion of it.
and make it longer because something thats good like this should be imho
Hehe, this song is totally about me having sleeping problems so I hope my little paragraph didn't make me come off as creepy :P
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.