None too shabby! ^_^
There are a few things that catch my ear that I think might need a little work on. It's a bit repetetive, although that's not always a bad thing. With ambience there's always a sense of repetition with a collision of randomness mingled into one. The biggest problem I think is the synth you used is a bit too strong to be by itself like that, it needs to have something backing it; like a bass or an ambient synth pad or something. The tonal progression is fine, like I said I just think the synth should be changed to something more ambient sounding, or even try some reverb or something; it's just a little direct. You can lay down a beat, your drums are done very well. I think all in all there just needs to be a bit more... fullness(?) to this piece. Keep at it!
Cool. I appreciate the comment and will keep that in mind. Though since I have made that track I have lost the files in which I used to make it. Which stinks cause I feel the same about it at times.
Really chill music I see, but it isn't much outside of that. for a guy like me who's bored and just sittting here it's rather boring and non entertaining. but if i was kicking back and i had time to listen to it all it'd be something more vauble.
good job nonetheless
I hope you come back and listen to it all. Cause what you hear in the beginning isn't what will be throughout the entirety of the song. It changes several times through the track.
my ears wrong mix of music
I am sorry that it wasn't your taste in music. I tend to go with what I feel at the moment and something like this comes out. But a 0, come on.