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Jul 23, 2008 | 5:04 AM EDT
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1.5 MB
1 min 4 sec
3.82 / 5.00

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Rated 3.82 / 5 stars
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Author Comments

Paff! This is a cool song.



Rated 4 / 5 stars


I'm going to have to agree with everyone here when they said that the end was too abrupt and the static made it sound a bit bad. If you could work on the ending alone then I think the score of your audio would be much better! The guitar and the drums went together very well. The only other thing that could of been worked on a little bit more would be the length of the submission. If these things were worked on a bit then this would be a great submission.


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svere responds:

Thanks for the review! But to be honest, I like my songs short and simple.


Rated 3.5 / 5 stars


I like that song. The guitars and drums go along very well together. Also the guitar plays some very nice tunes.

The problem is that the single riffs that the guitar plays are only connected very loosely with each other, so that it seems as if there's someone who just wants to show off, instead of play a nice song for the audience.

Also, the ending is too abrupt and there is a lot of static noise in there. Either try to edit the noises out or cut off the whole ending and replace it with something else (maybe end the song with another "Paff!").

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svere responds:

This song is all about showing off, hehe :D but thanks for the review!


Rated 3.5 / 5 stars


I'm not sure about the start and finish of this song. There's about a second and a half of silence, which coudl easily be cut, just to make the thing sound better. The static loaded rambling at the end could also either be tidied up or cut out completely to make the production a lot better.

Not sure about the lyric, but if that's what you've got to do, then that's what you've got to do.

I did like the guitar in it and you could have done with a lot more of it - throwing in things like a 20-30 second solo would have really added an explosive kick to the piece overall.

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svere responds:

Thanks for a great review! And the silence in the beginning is cause this was on a cd i burned so there were a small time between the songs.


Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

rock on

that was pretty good, a little short, and the ending could be better, but those were the only draw back to this, all the instruments were played brilliantly and went well with the other instruments, and though some others have said the singing in the background was unnecessary; I disagree, it added a lot to what would otherwise become repetitive, great song

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svere responds:

Woo, thanks for a nice review!


Rated 3 / 5 stars


It was a pretty good song that mixed well with the other instruments in it, but not really quite my style.

The harmonious singing in the background in some parts didn't make much sense, either. Just a little something that could be taken out; not really needed.

Also, it didn't end very well. It used some instruments that really weren't in the song, and had a whole lot of static there. Not really sure what's up with that, but it sort of messes up the song.

Not too good, not too bad.

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svere responds:

Okay... Thanks for your time :P