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Relative Dismissal (Reworked)

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Well, I re-worked the melody section of this and am proud to say that I believe this is the finished version. Tried cutting part of the main melody out and replacing it with something else to give it a more organized feel. Added in another melody in the "lulls" of the music to just kind of keep the song going.

Hope you guys like it constructive criticism is always welcome. :)


Uploaded the wrong version...this one has a longer intro and outro... :P This is the final version.

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I hear the difference.

The keys sound less random now, lol.

But I did on occassion hear some resonance with the piano. Some of your chords were clashing with the pads.

I realized you added the slayer. Me personally I didn't really think it fit the mood of the song. At least like that. Maybe if you put some delay on it, to make it sound less rapsy and flow with the song..

But I had favorited the first of this, I love the synth and the pads to death.. <3

It's freaking awesome.

I don't know what it is but I love this song.

I had a question I wanted to ask you regarding this, but I'll pm it to you.

Good job though!


im srry i cant tell u if theres ne thing wrong
i dont kno too much about making music like this myself.
but i can tell u that this song is pretty amazing.
my fav part is at 2.15 when the guitar sound comes in.
its very well put together.
and its got a good sense of rythem.
good job dude

Areken responds:

Thanks mate. :)

Great song

Great song but it got boring after while although I am really beginning to like this style. It could have used a better build up and some more variation throughout the song. Overall really cool though. I'd like it if you could check out my newest song too. Keep it up!

Areken responds:

I'll check it out and let you know what I think. :)

Thanks for the review too! There's one thing that I forgot to change in this before I uploaded it....which I'll change right now and re-upload. Basically it was a longer intro into the song, and outro. :P

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Jul 22, 2008
10:13 PM EDT
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6.7 MB
4 min 53 sec

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Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.