This is my first entry for July's Music Audio Contest : Sorrow Tears
Any useful comments? Improvements I could make? Review and I'll get back to you ASAP!
Finally, Hope you like it! :D
-kjhf
Well...
Well, this is a very crowded song. It's full of very piercing noises, so it is a little hard on the ears. Not really all that sad either. This could become a good song, but I think that you need to... devolve it a little. Simple would be better in this case. In summary: good idea, bad instrumentation.
As I said below, the piercing is intentional, hitting just where the woman is "Calling out." And that a Halloween piece can be still sorrowful.
Hmm, maybe I did overdo the layers on it however.
ACK!
Woh man... start all over with this song. For one, the choice of instruments were very bad... Even the notes were off tune. Sorry dude.. you just need to delete this song entirely and start all over. We all make mistakes.. even the big ones.
"Even the notes are offtune" I was kinda aiming for this, with dissonance in mind. It's meant to be a hard hitting sorrowful piece, not a piece that you go - "Well, that was nice."
doesn't quite sounds sorrowful...
Sounds more like halloween kinda! But still sounds nice.
Thank you!
EDIT: Halloween songs can be "sorrowful", depending on what you take the meaning to be. For example, a mother that has her child taken away by evil monsters at Halloween is sorrowful. But maybe I'm making excuses.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.
kjhf 
