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my frist song hope you like it, suggestions taken plz leave a comment

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My review, your song.

Liked the gargling intro voice, not the soft one so much. They certainly were neat, but didn't really add much to the overall song.

The song is very segmented sounding, more like bits and pieces of patterns that are neat, but it doesn't add up.

The mix is good enough that there is no reason for complaint.

Tacking on a 4/4 kick drum would probably have made this a crowd pleaser for NG's likes. I'd recomend experimenting with some simple drum rhytmhns.

For learning to write songs, keep things simple so their cohesive. Its a very gradual process developing a style, and continuity. Don't be afraid or concerned about someting being too repetitiive, its usually a better result then something that is way too dynamic.

PM me when you upload some more stuff, I'll review it too, and more in depth since I'll have a bit of a notion of development/change from this peice.

Tony36007 responds:

Thank you for your comment, very useful info, I will see what I can do :) I will be getting a Ubuntu OS soon so I can get some good music programs then :) @everyone thank you for your support :)

Pretty goood

I like this song, and I like the vocals i think they are awesome, (@lare the vocals dont need to be useful, they just need to sound cool, which they do) I agree with lare, in the bass needs to be stronger
Also, try to stick to one song in a song, In this song, if i cut it apart I could make a few different individual songs
but overall pretty good :D

Tony36007 responds:

Thanks for your comment :)

Not bad.

I like it. It just needs a stronger bass beat on the background. And the vocals were little useless. But still, good job!

Tony36007 responds:

thanks lare for the comment


I like the vocal distortions, but I think they'd be better if they were incoherent gibberish. But that's just me.

Tony36007 responds:

thank you for the comment i am still learning how to use the program but i could do that and update the song

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Jul 22, 2008
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2 min 4 sec

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