Yes, it sounds good for a first BUT this is not the whole song. Just a little preview of it...
And leave a comment on what you think and some ideas that you have in mind. I will reply back nicely ONLY if you leave me a encouraging comment or something nice you like about this preview.
I will update the Commentary every now and then but i mostly update my news post's...
1/8/08:
Wow, it took their sweet time to finally put this up on here. Anyway i hope you enjoy it!
l-Jack
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.