A true work in progress
My english teacher and I agree on the significance and insight behind this one.
You are not afraid to tell people the truth. So many punk songs, so many, are just complaining. It's a very complain ridden industry of music. But your lyrics, oh man, they don't complain. They acknowledge, accept, and deal with instead of just starring at it like adog being told a pun.
Clearly, you can't analyize the point of forever reaching for our goals without pointing out the grief that exists in the process. But from there you also acknowledge that around all that rain, you can see a way to work out what you've started. You also point out that this meaning reaches beyond looking at the now (despite stating to live in just today) and that looking back is not wrong, and is even good for clarification; to advance on your meaning.
What a good meaning.
So yes you live in today (the process), but because you remember and learn from the past (the work) you don't have to be afraid of the future (the result).
That's the truth I see. But who am I to say what is real and what is fake, right?
why are all the sogs under punk pop?
I just wrote another review just like this. You guys have talent but this is pop not punk. And im sorry but there is no such thing as pop punk damnit. To quote my own self saying "pop-punk" is like saying you saw an "elderly fetus". Way I see it is that a bunch of little "pop"ular possibly rich little spoiled brat kids wanted to think of themselves as edgy and "punk" but realized that their little virgin ears couldnt handle anything more brutal than a wind chime and invented a convoluted form of music aptly known as "pop-punk".
still pretty awesome though =]
your preety good
not bad 8
You've got a unique style, touching lyrics, amazing use of instruments, but your singing sounds like its something totally different from a totally different song. You sound like you making a speech but you have to consider your voice as an instrument and imagine a melody for it that would fit in really well with all your other instruments props man 4/5
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.