I won't go hating or anything. But I agree with Fuiste. Needs more of a prominent kick to it. It needs to be the backbone of the song. Give it some thump. ^_^
Other than that, it sounds pretty good for a first try. The melody is pretty good, and though short, it was a good listen.
wow ephixa, you have come a long long way and you also rule!!!!
this song is pretty cool.
i love your song in which was played on fear.fm
keep it up!
Ok, could be great.
The kick needs to be a hell of a lot higher in the mix. When I hear hard style the first thing I notice is the ungodly powerful kick that almost drowns out the rest of the song. Other than that, the song's got lots of potential, and the melody is really cool. My only other bit of advice would be to make the melody resolve once in a while, as it keeps hitting V chords and whatnot but doesn't really resolve. That's only my opinion though and it might very well have been a stylistic choice.
i like it, i give it a 10/10 =D
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