this is pretty good... could be better, though.
Its a passionate song man!
Its real good, sounds great and tight!
This was decent, except for the drums.
I'd look for a hi-hat and cymbal that is more sizzle-y, then EQ the high end on it so it sounds quite thin. The ones used at the moment seem a bit more angry and sort of kill the mood of the song.
Also, the snare could be replaced with something a bit more calm. At the moment it's out of place with the kick. The kick is really mellow and laid back, and the snare it a bit too aggressive for the overall picture.
However, everything else sounds good! Keep it up.
Portraying emotion is rather hard to do with music, but you did well, I think.
FatKidWitAJetPak already said most of it.
The ending was a little abrupt.
It doesnt suck! Your not going to get anywhere with that attitude. >:(
I liked it. It had a very calming mood to it with even a nice build up with a soothing beat. The main instrument was a little bit to much though. Use a calmer one. Very nice song all together!
I've convinced myself everything I've ever made is complete garbage =P