10 stars for the intro. you should deffinatley keep with that. work on it here and there. i know how those brain wipes are. the piano in the begining...awesome. you should throw some more of that in after the 20 seconds and go from there. i would like to see you go with this and come up with a final.
Thanks for the review and thanks for the 10! As I expected, people keep giving me zeros without telling me why. But, I will probably return to this song later and hopefully it will be longer than 20 seconds. I'm glad you liked it though!