Lovely....
Lovely Jubbly I'm 16 years old and need attention I really like all your songs I might have to come back and listen to all of them every day ;)
Author Comments
okay, i wanted to try something new this time, so i decided to try an intro i wouldnt normally use, its a hit to my friends, but i wanna see what NG has to say about it ^_^
the name came from a friend describing one of the synths as a techno DJ burping haha (thanks buddy)
please rate and review fairly ^_^ XD
[3nL]
*news* this isnt my last version of Techburp, so if you would kindly give me some feedback and criticism to help me perfect it, thanks
Much better...
Yup I can hear the improvement...but now I found another problem (lol)...you're using pretty much the same synths in your works... could've changed em at least, not default. still nice work!
3ndL3ss responds:
hmm, ill be sure to use this review, just wished this criticism was said earlier lol cause i finished techburp already, but thanks for the review
[3nL]
LOL
yea i agree man, this is prob ur best work so far, everything went smoothly i cant really comment much about it cus the song froze at 1.52 for me :O and i duno why, jus my internet again. But ye, its all good, i like when the first melody at like 1.00 comes in its good =D
but yeah, this is like top 5 good :D
4.36 / 5.00 (+ 0.068)
PEACE FUFFFFF
5/5
btw i reupped the deckz prevw.
3ndL3ss responds:
yeah, but im modifying it now to make it better, theres quite a lot of reviews here that are helpful to me ^_^, dude reason got 0 bombed =( it went from 4.52 - 4.45, so gay >=(
ill check decks out lol
[3nL]
Nice :D
I think you used a few to many presets here and there, but ill overlook that because it sounds awesome :)
I really liked it around 02:11 as one of the reveiwers below me said, although it did get a little cluttered just around then.
Apart from that, awesome song! :D
Keep up the great work :)
10/10
5/5
-xXSnowBladeXx
3ndL3ss responds:
thanks, yeah i used presets but they all preset based, i was sure to modify each of the synths use so make them their unique sound, yeah past 2:03 seems to be the hit spot of the song lol,
and as i said in my authors comments, this isnt the final version and im still working on the song as i write this response (im always working on it haha), and ill use this review to help me fix it up ^_^
[3nL]
Just made the 5 list.
You know it took me quite a while for me to get into the song. If i hadn't been doing something else at the same time it would have been a 4 and I would not have listened to the whole song. I'm glad I did, I think the full sound and good bass and melody did it well... try catch the attention better is my only advice. 5/5
3ndL3ss responds:
im glad you were doing something else at the time lol, cause i wouldnt want to get a lower score cause of 1 bit, im probs going to add some FX sounds in the intro so it catches the listeners attention a little more, but thanks, all the reviews here have been really helpful to me and ill be sure to use them in remaking this song, thanks for your review
[3nL]
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