i like it very much, good job:) love the synth work you done, and the drums sound very cool and original.great job man:)
all u need to do now
is to learn how to EQ. then u will have it man. cuz all them melodies n shit real nice. its jus EQing thats ur problem right now bruh.
keep it real!~
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.