i like tha piano
the delay totally adds to the feel, and then the guitar was added and it was good, i'd have to say the drums weren't a nice part, u could have gotten away with it being a straight instrumental without drums in my opinion, strings can also make or break a song, and u used them well, even when the bass came in i was like nice. But to totally tell u da truth, the drums didn't kill it, however they weren't good enough for everything that was going on around them Tell me what program u use?
overall i'd have to say it was swell