I see what you were going for, I would just re-work the mastering. I had fun listening to it with the volume way high though. :P
ya i never mastered it cuase i didn't want to spend alot of time on i just bounce the tracks together and called it quits.
its a great song butt try to clear up the voice and you might have somthing there
yea will im not the greatest singer by far so i tried to make it were the voice wouldn't ruin it more than what ive already done to it