Gettin' Better (Thumbs up)
Good intro...nice an slow acoustics...even motion...the flute in the background is a nice touch...
But around 30 seconds the guitar kinda get's sloppy.
But it gets better after that.
Your voice is definitely ALLOT better!
But "DO YOU KNOW (drop down fast sound....) HOW I GO!! IT was just a BAD DREAM..." (Needs more even flow) "WHEN YOU FALL ASLEEP!
Basically you need to have good flow. Like a water flow.
Powerful lyrics! Love it!
fix that high stuck sound around 3:18...
Remember...you can fix your pieces...and you don't always have to submit if your not sure if it's perfect...unless you just want to know how well or what could be improved.
My advice...once you have enough songs for an album...FIX them....listen to them again and again and again! And fix where you think it could use some changin.
All your songs have such original and great lyrics.
If you ever go pro...Don't let the fame get the best of you...focus on spreading a good message through your music...give considerable amounts of money to charity (secretly) and watch out who you date.
Remember...IF I may preach here...
You will not be entrusted with the Blessings of Heaven unless you can prove you can be responsible with your blessings here on Earth.
Do not let the riches of the world corrupt you...do not let your talents make you arrogant. You do music for the glory of all that is good...how you express yourself in your heart...and how you can make people understand feelings.
I know you will be great envoys of music. You might inspire...make someone change a lifestyle....help people understand.
You do it all for the sake of love of music.