I wouldn't fully remove the instrument that comes in at 0:58, this song needs a lead like that, maybe change the instrument
Yeah, choosing the right instruments is one of the most important things to me, but we didn't really have the time for it, plus I was on a unfamiliar computer/program.
although, if I had to build something off of this, I'd take the :58 lead notes in all, and write different music to back it up.
thanks for the review!
Not bad for a MIDI. I like the sound of the lead. I can't tell if you had a bass though, which would have made it better. You could take out that instrument that comes in at 0:58 though. It doesn't seem to fit. I think it might just be cause it sounds flat in some places.
Keep up the good work though!
yeah, I didn't really intend to put this up, but we did anyway, so yeah. It's hardly my best effort. Please, let me redeem myself, and check out my other, actually good songs. :P
Thanks for the review!