Not sure...

I think you need to work on getting consistant melodies, with notes that are the same legnth.
Some of the keys in the melody were a bit off, but i have to admit it did sound kinda cool.
I like the lead you used, and i definately dont agree with the reveiwer below me.
Keep improving, youve got a lot of potential for some awesome sounding songs :)
7/10
4/5

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