The loops are great, but...
I have almost the same program (I didn't realize that fourteen or thirteen came out, so I foolishly got twelve. Ah well, its still good), so I'm not sure if anyone else can tell, but for me its easy to figure out when you put in a new loop. You need better transitions.
The vocals were a bit loud, and when you moved out of the piano and music-box like sound, nothing really happened in the piece.
Okay, so you wanted a story?
The bell tolls in a forgotten village, where the people are all but dead, carrying on for no reason other than they forgot that happiness exists. Despair looms overhead, the life around is decay. The drums of a far off war sound. A lone soldier watches his comrades die, and tries valiantly to fight off the enemy. It is a vain effort though. The war is all but over, all of his comrades are gone. Cowardly, he runs as far away as he can, into the village, just to find that it's state is that of rot. He wants to help, he searches for an answer, some way to help them. It isn't out of compassion that he helps though. It's out of guilt.
The first and last drum sounds, as he sets off on a brave and dangerous quest.
Um, yeah... Thats a weird story I'm getting.
Well thank you for your advice, very much appreciated.
You're story is very inspiring and I can understand where you're going with this.
Thanks again for your review. =] I'll keep all in mind when working on my next piece.
But, the vocals are a bit loud. It would sound a lot better if they were softer. Also, the echo is a bit much, don't get me wrong, it's a rather nice touch, yet it seems to last a bit too long. Pretty much all you need to do * this is just my two cents* turn everything down, around 1:46 when the brass comes in, it would sound better if the brass was a bit louder then everything else, but not too loud.
Thank you greatly for your review.
Very helpful, and I def. need more reviews like yours. This is my first peice and I need as much advice as I can get. =P Thank you very much.
I'll keep all that in mind in my next piece. =]
SO pretty, but i dont like the vocals. ;-;
But, wow, this is really nice. <:
Thanks a bunch for your review. =]
Much appreciated. Yeah, maybe next time I wont put vocals, I just felt they gave the song a little weird touch to it, but yeah.
Thanks again. =]
I like this song, very much, a great tensional classical piece. I would very much like to do a remix of this. =] Great job!
Haha, thank you! Much much appreciated.
And of course, you can remix it whenever you want, be sure to send me the remix if you ever remix it. =P I'd love to hear it!
Thanks again. =]
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.