ewwww, it was funny win the hi hats came in and it was still just yuck
You just really sound like a white kid that wants to 'try' to rap, but really probably shouldn't. It takes practice though, i used to sound like this. XD
your instrumentals need help too. they're trajic. O.o
You ain't got a rapper voice... And the voice sound was kinda weird. I guess your "voice recorder" ain't the best one. lol
As Critic49 said, lame subject.
it made me laugh !
kidz can't rap.
and it has a lame subject. so sorry.
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