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Trance death

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A new song, it's only loop, I know it-s not very good.
Don't forget to let me comments please!

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not good, but not horrible...

this isnt GREAT but its not HORRIBLE either. it shows that you know somewhat what you are doing, i can see you are just learning. Practice makes perfect, and always strive to be better. my music is not that great, but i feel i get better with ever track. dont hold back, dont care what others think, make the music for urself and you will get it.
i think synthkitty said it all pretty much. be more melodic, i find thats always the hardest part. keep it working.
good luck.


P.S. check out my new song ~Discoma~ ^-^ hope u enjoy it.

Some advice...

It seems that the biggest problem with this song is the bass that you used as a lead instrument.

1. It's too muddled-- the notes don't come accross very clearly.
2. It has no hooks-- the patterns that it plays aren't catchy, and feel too random.

It might be a good idea to add more bass tones to your drums in there, too. It sounds kind of washed out.

Good luck!

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Jul 13, 2008
8:18 AM EDT
File Info
2 MB
1 min 28 sec

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