Conflicted
I really like the sonic characteristics and choices. Unfortunately, there seems like there is a lot of conflict with notes, lots of chords that just don't seem to match up. I also agree with wicksta that the guitar sounds off at times, even if it was supposed to be accents, accents should only effect the volume and intonation, not the timing, unless you're going for mariachi electronica metal. Either way, I look forward to what you come up with in the future, this is a very interesting piece.