Wrong way to go experimenting
Well, nice technical expertise on this one, but it sounds a little bit like RnB is what you were going for, which isn't what you want to discover through this instrumentation, try going for trance or ambient, i think you'd show some great songs there.
So technically well done, theme choice not well done.
Keep working on music for us!
Yeah, it actually is a R&B beat I made for a friend. Forgot about newgrounds being more of an ambient, techno, trance friendly place. Thanks for the review, appreciate the feedback.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.