I love the first half of the song. It simply sounds great. But in my opinion, the notes just clash too much at 1:15 and it continues till the end of the song. A little touch on the clashing notes would be really cool but it caries on too long.
I just felt that first part of the song is too sweet to go on like this so I broke it a little and enjoyed doing so :P
thanks for the review bro!