Sad, happy, and serious 0_0
At parts, it makes you think of a sea funeral, others it reminds me of zelda: windwaker :) made me tear a bit
For an improvement, this is better, but the song can still go a long way. You have a nice tune there but the instruments could be a bit better and you might want to see if you can create a bit more sense of flow, as in, each note is currently singularly played without any blending from the previous one.
The flute should probably be made a bit louder and clearer as I couldn't hear it properly, even with my headphones on max volume.
Try adding in some strings, they would complement it nicely and a slow rolling drumbeat would be perfect!
Good luck, see if you can find some better instrument samples, there's usually some decent ones lying around the internet if you look hard enough.
Thanks for the review!
Hmm...I've tried both of my computers and can hear the recorder fine. Maybe my computers are just magic lol.
Thanks for the suggestions about the strings and percussion, I think that would go nicely!
I don't really know what sort of program I should use. Finale only exports as midi, and Sibelius can't do dynamics all that well. I don't want to spend 200 dollars on a minor hobby, or seven hours patching things together. I welcome recommendations.