good song,because i hate mario!!!!!

Requiem for a Dream

The Original-Original is "Requiem for a Dream" by Clint Mansell made for the Movie "Requiem for a Dream" it was later on Remixed with some more Epic Orchestra as "The Two Towers - Requiem For A Dream remix" the remixed version has been used for quite many different movie trailers however.
I hope you didn't just take a Midi file and replaced the instruments with different ones, because if you didn't you got the timing and melody done quite good. In any case I agree with "Conian" on that clipping bit.. its getting quite distorted at the end.

Good, but too simple

I love the original, and your remix in basic is good, but you really need to remaster it.

The original song is "Requiem For A Dream" from "LOTR: Two Towers" soundtrack (at least that is what was written in that DBZ AMV where I heard the original song)

Ouch

The all-over idea is good, but your synths leave ALOT to be desired. They sound rather standard FruityLoops-ish, to be quite frank. Also, be sure to tweak the volume on your recordings. At around 3.00, the song starts clipping like crazy. Go ahead, experiment some more with filters on those synths, keep an eye on the volume and re-sumbit, because I want to hear this one cleaned up! It's got potential!