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Author Comments

192kb had to lower the quality due to the length of the song.
i got bored so i decided to play around making a song, i have not made one in a little while so it was about time. listen and enjoy. comments and reviews always appreciated as well as constructive criticism. ^_^


P.S. if you are going to give it a low score, please write a review as to why, i would like to know where i can improve, and dont just say oh because its crap. :P



Nice song man. Seems to be more Dance than Ambient though I think, but genre doesn't really matter. I think you were right not to add much, if any reeverb to the percussion. For one thing it adds more depth to the sound, but also makes it more prominent and focused. Theres a couple of build ups at the end which don't really seem to work. They're kinda like anti-climaxes which is a shame. Great use of percussion. The variety goes really well. Nothing seems to odd not to be there, but very varied. The riff is ok and it sounds well EQd and stuff. Nice job :)

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Neogma responds:

thanx, i think i spent more time EQing this track than making the track itself. lol. however when i play it in my car i cant see out my mirrors, and thats with all my bass as low as it can go. oh well, nothing new. ^-^


well, it was a pretty cool song, but had way to many presamples and that kind of stuff, the clap for instance is VERY important not to use presamples on, btw you use FL right? but pretty cool song:) loved the build up, and the kinda ''working theme'' you know when they work their brains out in the movies trying to figure something out! xD but back to the point, very cool song, keep it up:)

btw i also create trance/techno ish music, and have a new preview out (very rough) + some recently added songs, why dont you come and check em out?:)


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Neogma responds:

thanx for the review, and NO i DONT use FL, not my style of program, i find alot of ppl that use FL around here a lot of their music sounds the same or similar.
but thank you for the review, i shall check out your music as well when i get a chance.


Cool techno add.

I like the beginning, it makes a mysterious cyberspace sound, then when the beats come in, you nail it down. It got repetitive, then went on to more to improve it. Very good stuff you displayed man.

Needs some improvement, but all it really needs is more to add on.
But other than that, its really nice.


Neogma responds:

thanx man, this is the kinda of criticism i need. ^-^ i shall keep working on bettering myself. but i dont think this song was to bad for only working on it for 3 hrs. ^-^ ;)



i wish they would use the beginning of this while dialing a computer up to the internet with dial up lol. it sounds really cool 5/5

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Neogma responds:

so what? are you saying that you are still on dial-up? man, i feel bad for you, and your computer. :P
yeah, that sound would have sounded way cooler. i probably would have just been dialing up all day.
thanx for the vote.

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Credits & Info


4.22 / 5.00

Jul 12, 2008
1:37 AM EDT
File Info
6.3 MB
4 min 37 sec

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