This song is okay. The sound quality isn't that great. It almost seems as if you were messing with the Bass levels. It seems off-tempo at times. After the beginning, it gets a bit old and repetitive.
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These reviews are getting a bit old and repetitive : P.
This song WOULD be enjoyable, but it sounds like someone has their hand over the speakers, distorting the whole song, after removing that, the other problem with this song is that it seems "out of order", like the intro's 0:23-0:35 and the melody come in too late.
Thanks for the supplying the specific times of what I need to correct
I'm not really very keen on the quality of much of this track, it sounds to be very distorted, not sure if you did that with intent or if it's by accident but I'm not really keen on the distortion. Other than that though, from what I can make out of this, everything does sound okay and such, much of this sounds to be played very well and comes together well.
Though at the ending you have some kind of instrument that doesn't really fit in with what as playing through much of the rest of the song and I find this inconsistant and not really working with the overall tune. The opening is pretty good though, so nice work on that but I would really suggest a new ending and making the sound cleaner.
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I like bass and hard kicks,
thank you for your suggestions,
I think that the bass is a little rough around the edges and you've got a conflict between parts of the tune, where the timings clash. Smooth out these rough edges and we've got a great little tune in the making.
I think that the ending was a powerful piece, but not really of the same type as the rest of the track, so that should be taken into a separate work and elaborated upon.
[Review Request Club]
thank you for taking the time to review,
You're right, this song had tons of good melody, but it seems like the way that it is presented could have been a bit better. Like at 0:22 it just feels like the song should explode into an upbeat main theme, where instead it seems to start over with another intro-type piece. The transition to the ending at around 1:40 was quite abrupt and didn't really flow with the part before it, too. I would take a look at that.
Once again, you've got some really good melodies here, I would spend some more time refining this and working on the transitions and you'll have something really good. :)
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Thank you, I'll keep trying.