Interesting change for the better...
I never thought this theme could turn into something like Jazz; and honestly I thought it would be something I would've hated. But you proved me wrong, and I am glad, actually. I do understand you can't record properly, and neither can I. At first the theme sounded like something from a completely different game series, but eventually I caught on.
Even so, with the surprise like that, you definitely put some effort, so I do gotta reward you with the good stuff.
Keep it up. If you got more tunes to jazz up, I'd be interested in hearing them; even if you can't record them the best. :)
With timing fixed, this song would be extremely awesome.
out of rythm
everything was very out of rythm, now jazz or not, things oughta be in rythm, try to work on that, and try to do some mastering, to smoothen everything out:) but it COULD be an awesome song, just please remember the rythm:)
It pretty much is in rhythm, aside from a few spots. Now the description clearly states all of what this song is about. I quote: "I basically had to play each track one at a time and keep the timing, or to the best of my ability, in my mental metronome." So considering that, I think I did pretty good with what I have. Did you even hear the whole thing? The off-beat is also important, especially for the piano parts at the end. It keeps its beat, "Beating Source". A beat is only as good as it is felt for the song in question. I felt it flow right on, mhmm.
Slow on down.
A tad faster than I expected, a little smoother and it would have been awesome.
But I have no say, never played the gmae, so never heard the song.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.