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DbX - Indiscretion

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Breakcore'ish song. Overcompressed and a little sloppy but I guess I'm done with it.

This was made for Father of Death's drum challenge. ;)

Yoshi and a cat are featured in this song.

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Its good

I understand that you werent trying to cover up the song. But I think you over used the voices and you could have added a bit more of a constant beat.

Shamukh responds:

Having a listen weeks later of not hearing it at all, I agree about having a more constant beat. ;) Little did I know at the time that half of the 'sloppiness' was because the beat really has no order at all.

Thanks for the review. :)

Not Bad

Creative beat you got there.
Lame ending though.
Cut off too short.

Shamukh responds:

Not sure what you mean haha. The ending isn't cut off at all, and if you mean that overall the song is too short, this was a song made by Father of Death for a drum challenge (stated in the description), so it's not supposed to be full-length.

Thanks for the review anyway. :)

Varied Percussion

I love the 0:35-0:40 yelp xD. It's really hard to make a song feel more full out of a 1 minute trance tune, but you did well! I love how you used so many different sounds (if not, it seems like a lot of sounds). You could possibly turn up the percs to stand out because in some points they seemed a little buried. Overall, great listen! (I haven't messed with Mario Paint in ages xP)

Shamukh responds:


Thanks for the review! :)

i like it

although it was sloppy im not going to hold you down for it because you admited it was. I like the beat and sounds used. i would love to see this remixed and fine tuned because i think this beat actually has the potential to make front page if made right.

Shamukh responds:

I didn't make it right. :(

I agree actually. I know what the problem but I don't kno how to fix it. The drums need to be eccentuated more and have less treble. it's not as easy as EQing and turning the volume up sadly. anyway thanks for the review!

Credits & Info


4.00 / 5.00

Jul 9, 2008
10:08 PM EDT
File Info
1.3 MB
1 min 26 sec

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