I just finished making this, but I still think it needs improvement. I'm not sure if it qualifies as trance, but that doesn't really matter. Yeah, I know it's really long for a preview, but I'm just looking for feedback about the final.

Plz review saying how you think it could be improved.

EDIT: If you liked this one, check out my new one: http://www.newgrounds.com /audio/listen/158517
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