I do agree that it could be a little faster though...:)
I have to agree with the guy below me...
I'm not a professional or anything but I do know what I do and don't like. That fade in at the beginning seemed a but too long. I was worried the song broke XD
I would like it to be a bit faster but thats just my preference. I like really high paced music trance/techno music O_O
As you asked, a review on how to improve your song
Youve put in a nice bassline, although it was way too basic, might me a job to work on
The overall melody wasnt bad, but maybe its an idea to throw in somewhat more contradicting aswell as a flinch of dynamics.
Also, the intro is defenitly something you should work on, im not feeling the fade in at all.
I must say i like the introducting pause a few secs afer the fade in, aswell as the melody. it could use some various high pitching, but thats my taste :)
not bad job at all, dont get me wrong. It has its moments, and im simply giving some personal advice ^^
hope i was helpfull
Thanks, i'll keep that in mind.
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