<TeK> Omnipresent {Preview}

Author Comments

I just finished making this, but I still think it needs improvement. I'm not sure if it qualifies as trance, but that doesn't really matter. Yeah, I know it's really long for a preview, but I'm just looking for feedback about the final.

Plz review saying how you think it could be improved.

EDIT: If you liked this one, check out my new one: http://www.newgrounds.com /audio/listen/158517
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Reviews

bird0l0v3

2008-09-09 01:17:22

LOVE IT!

I do agree that it could be a little faster though...:)
Great job!

Jackass-Killer

2008-07-25 19:33:15

I have to agree with the guy below me...

I'm not a professional or anything but I do know what I do and don't like. That fade in at the beginning seemed a but too long. I was worried the song broke XD

I would like it to be a bit faster but thats just my preference. I like really high paced music trance/techno music O_O

8/10
5/5 =)

Rwinius

2008-07-09 16:49:15

hmmm

As you asked, a review on how to improve your song

Youve put in a nice bassline, although it was way too basic, might me a job to work on
The overall melody wasnt bad, but maybe its an idea to throw in somewhat more contradicting aswell as a flinch of dynamics.
Also, the intro is defenitly something you should work on, im not feeling the fade in at all.

I must say i like the introducting pause a few secs afer the fade in, aswell as the melody. it could use some various high pitching, but thats my taste :)

not bad job at all, dont get me wrong. It has its moments, and im simply giving some personal advice ^^

hope i was helpfull
7/10
3/5

TeKNeTiC responds:

Thanks, i'll keep that in mind.