Hmm...

It's a great start, create this into a full song. But i feel that it's missing something...

Its good, keep working on it

I'd say this is pretty good, but it does need some work, 'course, being a DEMO, ill give you the 10/5

My suggestions, do some EQ work with the lead, especially during the intro, the lead has too much going on in the higher frequencies so tune those down a little

Also, ease up a little bit on the Gate effect during the mid-section of the song, it starts taking away from the whole thing when half of it keeps getting muted out.

A little more reverb would be nice on all of the instruments, but nothing too much

:24 was nice, the whole song is pretty cool and the lead is finally a little different than what half of newgrounds sounds like,

Can't wait for the final!

Nice

Pretty good, Sounds like you didnt put much work into it though, Its does sound like you put work into it......but not enough