its ok
its good if you want me to do a resumé but there is alaways a little space for inprovement
Made by myself and a friend of mine after a long walk following a stream to the ocean.
*shrug*
: )
It's got some pop and fizz, but undoubtedly not perfect. Second completed song ever! They can only get better right?
its ok
its good if you want me to do a resumé but there is alaways a little space for inprovement
Pretty good
It reminds me of that light parade in dysneyland. It's pretty catchy, but it feels like it's lacking in sound that can keep my interest. I think it needs more complexity to make the simplicity of the beat feel more alive. Try it! With more work on this song, you could get a lot of attention on newgrounds.
Ahah! Yes I can see what you mean about not really pulling you into the song. I think maybe this is just one of those songs that started out as a good idea but fell through in actual production. Thanks for the review and the encouragement!
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.