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Jul 9, 2008 | 10:52 AM EDT
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5.8 MB
2 min 31 sec
2.99 / 5.00

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Rated 2.99 / 5 stars
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1,061 Plays | 77 Downloads
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Electronic - Techno

Author Comments

This is my first actual song and my first song for Newgrounds. We can share this experience together lol. I tried to make a simple song and play around with some sounds and this is what I came up with. It is realy two different melodies that get changed. Please leave comments.

If it is a zero please tell me why.



Rated 1 / 5 stars

Needs a loooooot of work.

Too sour in the beginning. Drums are way too present once they come in, and the rest of the sounds are way too quiet as well as they feel way too random and have no real impact on the listener.

Sorry, but you need more work in your music.

hesopchoie responds:

Yeah, I was messing around and I thought I would put it up. Your opinion is honest and I thank you for that. I am going to work on making my music better though.


Rated 4 / 5 stars

Not bad man...

You reviewed one of my first songs about 2 years ago, just thought I'd return the favor. Sounds like the way I would make music when it was my first time. (No offense, hopefully haha) There was so much stuff on FL I didn't know how to use. If you're still making music, I could teach you a thing or two. Anyways, there was one note off key from the rest. That's my biggest problem. But I see where you're coming from. The snares really set the mood. Keep it up!

hesopchoie responds:



Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

Since This Is The First.

It's very good for your first song and/or just screwing around on FL. I'd advise you not to keep repeating the same though. And the only part I really liked was the break in the middle. Sounded like crash bandicoot :D Anyways, good for just screwing around. :P 7/10 4/5

hesopchoie responds:

Now that you said that, it does remind of me Crash Bandicoot a little.


Rated 3 / 5 stars


Good job for starters. My advice would be to set yourself apart from the rest of the audio universe and not rely heavily on beats. Stuff like the section at 1min without the beats is what the world needs more of. One look around will tell you that any fool can do beats. Concentrate on the melodic and harmonic elements as these are the hardest for most people and you seem to have skills at this.



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hesopchoie responds:

Thank you, I havent been making much music at all lately. I might make something this week though and I will keep that in mind.


Rated 4 / 5 stars


this is very enjoyable I like it!!

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hesopchoie responds:

Thank you. It doesnt deserve a 8 though. There are many other songs that are better.