Nice one

Although I'm more in DnB than Techno T thought I have to give you a review jst as you did ^^ Good Idea for the Track - but I think you should connect the voica more to the track itself and make it flow with the music not next to it. I missed some buildup and you should pick some better noticable drums ;) Keep working on your style, I started just about a half year and I'm not trying that stuff every day as you can guess ^^ Learning by doing works good in here...